Stars

He put a little stardust in his lies

I loved him anyways

Though blind to reason for a gentleman

A man with eyes so true

Yet a heart that remained false

Whether he had his eyes of gentle brown

Or lustful blue upon a night-sky

He never knew how much he meant to me

Born to never once meet,

But forever loved

Not even there, yet he stole that heart

Not just once, thousands

Everything I did for him

Often went past

When will I see him?

He will never once see

A star, but still a man

Every woe of a lady yearns

How oft' and how those memories were left behind

Just a part of him in a part of me

Reviews

[Emily]

'Born to never once meet,'

Love this line!!
Keep up the great work!!

[GalaxyGhost]

I appreciate it!

[Kesha]

This is tragic and beautiful in many ways. Very nicely done, I love it

[GalaxyGhost]

Thank you so much!

[Kesha]

You're welcome

[Shannon]

So sadly beautiful. The wish and longing is evident.
I would suggest the stylized language of the last three lines feels slightly out of place. I would recommend either modernizing them or integrating more through out.

[GalaxyGhost]

Thank you!