Finding

Contemplation about feelings.

          Often wandering, but not quite lost

          The destination I find brings a cost

          Do you feel short on the reward that destination brings?

          Sometimes the reward brings too much or too less of things?

Then smile again because there will be more

More to cling to

More to sing to

Treasures uncovered than the ones before

          Those are the right moments in life if you simply look harder

          Except the right times come without a good fight

          Fight reasonably and through a bloody fight or a subtle reason

          Reason can even make the wise seem the fools in those

Finding too much or finding too little

It’s all in the mind of all such people

The pain of heart that hurts too much

And the joy of life that is too little

It’s alright to be scared

It’s alright to be imperfect

  Never let someone be a no one

          Always know for ignorance is the worst part of bliss

Author's Note

This is my first post on this site as I am recently new. Please feel free to critique on what could be improved (i.e. sentence structure, free verse vs. rhyme, etc.).

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

I really loved the concept... You have delicately supported your concept on thoughts through your words... As your poem is contemplating on the concept of thoughts it gives the reader an opportunity to think... The ending of the poem is something that seemed excellent...

As for the structure, I think the first four lines seemed very good in terms of rhyming but as I read on, the rhyming seemed less (I don't know if you did it intentionally or not), but it has uniquely delivered it's message... The poem expresses a nice flow which was beautiful... As for your first work I really enjoyed it...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[GalaxyGhost]

Thank you! I appreciated that feedback. Basically, I was trying to unravel the scheme of things like finding something in a gift if that makes sense.