Chaotic life

I think it's a bad one. Tell me what you think

Sky and Earth
Heaven and Hell
the princess on her tower
the king on his throne
live in chaos showed by the living
when shall the peace come?
after our time begone?
After our death place a kiss on our head?
Or when the time had steal anything from us?

haven't you feel it?
the feeling of lonelyness?
Haven't you reach it?
The passion that went away?
I shall put the honesty inside your tongue
i'm tired of your fake words
i'm sick of your hollowness
i'm hurt because of your act
let start something new
to replace the old one
you are to start it
and you are to end it.

Reviews

[verano]

The parallel lines at the beginning of the poem seem to set the tone. They seem to suggest that the sky is like heaven (peaceful) and that the earth is like hell (chaotic).