Static Wake

Wild static drove

   My sleeping senses.

Monday blues blew

   A different tune.

You who stands

   Like silent wild grass

Suddenly stir

   My lonely heart.

Did you know what 

   You did was felony?

Committed I am

   Yet confounded again.

12/11/20

Reviews

[Haley]

This is great, it has amazing readability while being intriguing.

[barleygirl]

Interesting & intriguing . . . we strongly feel the tangled thoughts of this narrator . . . some of the most sparkling & original ways to express how it feels when one has been dissed or dumped (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Joshua Espinosa]

Thank you, Margie. Sending back virtual hugs ((-.-))

[Paul Bell]

Anyone who can take the Monday blues away gets my vote, and if this continues for the rest of the week even better.

[Joshua Espinosa]

Same here.

[Xander Writes]

I love it, it is amazing, short but easily understood and it conveys a lot of information.

[Joshua Espinosa]

Thank you, Alex.