Bound
A Poem by
Gaia Octavia
Thoughts wrapped
at chapter's end,
held together
by yards of twine
Raw thumbs -
these fiery things,
stung forever
by thoughts of mine
Time lost -
a colored blur,
burnt to forget
its caustic touch
Calm smile
struggling for words,
lips never part
yet say so much
© 2017 Gaia Octavia
Reviews
I liked the mystery of this one. It's one to come back to and roll over in the mind.
Posted 7 Years Ago
Poetically sublime with superb imagery, splendid musicality, and....
"lips never part
yet say so much"
what an ending! A poetic gem indeed. Well done!
Posted 7 Years Ago
Poetically sublime with superb imagery, splendid musicality, and....
"lips never part
yet say so much"
what an ending! A poetic gem indeed. Well done!
7 Years Ago
Thanks a bunch! I almost didn't post it, so I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed it. 😊
I really like this poem. I feel like it's about anxiety, but then again it says
"calm smile,
Struggling for words"
Which makes we wonder otherwise... I guess I'll have to analyze it some more lol, but the best poems aren't always the easiest to inturpret :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
I really like this poem. I feel like it's about anxiety, but then again it says
"calm smile,
Struggling for words"
Which makes we wonder otherwise... I guess I'll have to analyze it some more lol, but the best poems aren't always the easiest to inturpret :)
7 Years Ago
Thank you very much ☺ I love hearing what poems mean to others. It's my favorite part of writing.
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Added on July 14, 2017
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