Later Much

A drop to prove you even care
about the times you were not there
and one to show you have remorse
for blowing me way off my course
still one more is overdue
for all you did not live up to
and though I've long since said goodbye
I still just wanna see you cry

Reviews

[Quinn W]

I very much liked this poem. It was very well written with an interesting topic. We need closure in order to forgive. Short but very good!

[Gaia Octavia]

Thank you very much ☺

[James]

hmm, interesting how we hold on to anger long after someone did us wrong. I felt this way about my father...still do.

[Gaia Octavia]

We do hold on to a lot long after people have left our lives. Without closure we continue to search for things to validate how we feel. As always, thanks for you comment ☺