Alone
A Poem by Gaia Octavia
A shirt forgotten
out on the line
is free to dance
in the wind
© 2016 Gaia Octavia
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This is such a cute poem! :) I love the playfulness in it, it omits a sort of childlike innocence. I love it!
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thanks a bunch ☺
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I like the spare use of language. Reminds me of a Haiku in its brevity and terseness. The image is vivid and dynamic. Nice one!
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thank you very much ☺
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