Alone

Alone

A Poem by Gaia Octavia

A shirt forgotten
out on the line
is free to dance
in the wind

© 2016 Gaia Octavia


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This is such a cute poem! :) I love the playfulness in it, it omits a sort of childlike innocence. I love it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Gaia Octavia

8 Years Ago

Thanks a bunch ☺
I like the spare use of language. Reminds me of a Haiku in its brevity and terseness. The image is vivid and dynamic. Nice one!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Gaia Octavia

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much ☺

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Added on April 22, 2016
Last Updated on April 22, 2016
Tags: poetry, free verse, solitude, happiness, peace

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Gaia Octavia
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A Poem by Gaia Octavia