very short and sweet:) I absoultely loved how you connected mistakes to happiness becasue with making mistakes looking back or at them it's so important to understand that they happened for a reason and the outcome of a mistake should be some sort of happiness:)
I really like your poem. I like how you sorta brought life in the picture in the middle. It gives it a more, what's the word I'm looking for, mystic feeling to it. It short and sweet as well.