Save The Bees

'Buzzington Bee' needs saving...don't you think?

Buzzington Bee 

Has a request for thee

Drink a drop of your favourite tea

Spin around times twenty three

Tap a tune on your knee,

Whilst he turns these flowers into honey.

They die: Flowers, plants, the hive 

None can stay alive

Whilst the humans strive

Taking it all, their own prize

Is the price of this irksome hive’s life. 

Close your eyes, now you can’t see

Poor little buzzington bee 

Dancing his request: ‘Come and save me’ 

Plant some flowers, plant some trees,

Its’ not too late 

To save

Buzzington Bee…

Reviews

[Nisreen]

I love bees
and honey

and this is a beautiful message
to save bees :)

[Anuolua]

Nice..I like the poem's atmosphere

[Ria Carol]

Its really cute poem...it sends a strong message too... :)

[Inject Positivity]

This is a very thought provoking write, here you made some valuable points and message to the reader... How heartbreaking it is to see those beautiful creatures getting lost from this world, and we the humans still don't understand it and just keep destroying our nature... But all is not lost, we just have think and take positive steps towards saving our nature and the endangered bees....

The poem has a good flow and very good balance in it with a clear message which really stands out here... I'm excited to read more of your works and I will make sure to keep an eye on your page....

Regards
Dhiman

[John Stussy]

Whimsical and light at the beginning, the stark statement of man's attack on the ecosystem stands out all the more for it. Brilliant poem, save the bees.