Your thoughts

Here I am again, writing something about you
I guess you guessed so many things I didn’t know you’d guess
Let me remind you, thoughts are just thoughts, we just need to express them
The things you’re thinking right now, I’ve thought of those things
The reality is sad, and the more you seclude yourself, the worse it would get
Experience speaks for themselves and this is me being concerned about your thoughts
So what’s crazier than a heartbreak?
When things were so sweet, you talked as if the time just passed by
Said vows which were meant to be broken
Countless nights talking, sharing, singing, writing piece by piece together
Stroll around the world for years but then one day
She asked for space
It wouldn’t mean anything different right? Would it?
Just like that, the treatment was not the same
After all those years, I guess that was goodbye?
and yes it was, by that time, I was slowly fading away
To seclude myself to a point of deeper than the well
I thought I'd be alright but I guess I was not
I can’t just stop thinking about it
How can you moved on when she was not yours to begin with?
it’s just sad remembering of how we used to be
We were something and we were friends but now
what am I to you?

Reviews

[Yve]

" How can you moved on when she was not yours to begin with?
it’s just sad remembering of how we used to be
We were something and we were friends but now
what am I to you? " - these lines were thoughts i really wanted to scream.

This poetry of yours takes me back to the past which i really cant forget. This is so beautiful and amazing and full of emotions.

[Gabby The GAB]

ohh now I'm taking u back from the past? haha thanks Yve! :))

[Yve]

Yes yes buts its fine no sweat hahah.. Youre welcome :)