alien

I've made up my mind

I don't need to think it over

I saw it and I'm not blind

I think it doesn't need a cover

I expected high

I never wondered why

Your "I" always made things complicated

You as an egocentric one is unmatched but related

Your words, in it, it was already indulged

You, yes you, for you I don't matter much

Your perspective, for me it was unforeseen

You dont understand me at all, I'm an alien

I guess we're not fit to be together

Together not as one but together as we enjoy the fun

You guessed wrong but still you thought that it was for the better

A sister or a brother, what am I to you doesn't affect who I am

Our thoughts are also not aligned

You and I need to unwind

The spark stopped with the rhyme

Because

I 

Dont

Know

What's on your mind

Reviews

[Bear]

Critique: (I dont need to think it over) don't - you should change all the dont to don't

Review: I read this then loaded it on my text to speech and listened to it and this is a poem that needs to be heard to feel its full impact. That title friend can be a knife to the heart when romance is sought. Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Gabby The GAB]

I did not notice that one until you said it haha thank you bear!!

A sharp knife it is :)

[Ace Jaxon]

This is very good, and I relate to this slightly. Keep up the good work.

[Unspoken poet]

LOVE the ending, this is wonderful. I really enjoyed this one. Awesome writing.

[Gabby The GAB]

Thank you very much! :) I'm glad you liked it :D

[Najam Us Saher]

Sometimes one cannot understand and know what one is thinking, I really liked this, it was perfect with balanced rhyme and expression.

[Gabby The GAB]

Thank you for that sweet review Najam! :D

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. ☺