Everyone's Life is A Movie

Everyone's Life is A Movie

A Poem by Gabby Nieves

I am the baby's first breath,
The leap into forever
beyond the windowsill,
past the curtains
and into the rose garden

© 2016 Gabby Nieves


Author's Note

Gabby Nieves
might make this into something more but for now whatever, is anyone even listening anyways?

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Yes, a bit shorter than your usual, but that won't stop me from over thinking it.... With a baby's first breath, a leap into forever may indeed be beginning, with the window sill representing mortality, the curtains a metaphor for the veil between this physical plane and the spiritual one, and the rose garden.... A hopeful vision of paradise to come.
I'm probably way off, but hey, that's the fun thing about every person's mind working differently, right?

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on January 21, 2016
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