Washing You Away

Lost in the softness of the sky 

Waves crashing up on the beach

And washing away the remains of you

Heat stinging my back

Bringing me to life

I could feel my heart beating 

Pathetically embracing emotion

You never had any idea of what I am

Turquoise dreams 

Deep blue desires 

Drowning into the abyss 

What I thought of you,

Just a thought

Being dragged out to Sea

Reviews

[Jake Donald Stephens]

"You never had any idea of what I am."
Nobody does. Nobody has any idea of what anyone is.
But I like coming here, and reading your work. It's a comfort (whether that makes sense or not).

[Richard]

when lost at sea..oops not enough characters apparently
this was nice

[don't know]

The sea clears all and consumes you at the same time. nice write.