Alone With Myself

I wish I could suffer in silence
Studying the blank stares of those around me
I wonder if I'm alone here
Watching helplessly as the days pass and blur together
Like the pages of a never-ending book
The cuts finish healing
And the bags under my eyes begin to fade
It's true, nobody notices until you're gone
No matter how loud you scream
So what will become of me?
Of all of this
When my mind is just a cloud
And my body broken sticks

Reviews

[Jamestown]

This is sad, but you have written well,thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Gabby Nieves]

Thank you, and you b-blessed too c:

[Yasmin]

what can we say? its a crawl world after all!
I like this so much. the way you describe your reality allows me to feel what you felt not only as a reader but as a human too. It's frustrating !
Either way keep up the good work
Well done

[Gabby Nieves]

Wow, I just saw this review and I just wanna thank you for giving me motivation again. I'm so glad you liked this little thing haha thanks!

[JC]

you're not alone, what confuses me is why we don't interact more, create more, talk more...great read.

[Gabby Nieves]

We've lost connection :c but thank you for the review

[George Peck]

what a great poem sad and lonely but still great. I hope you know your never alone everyone on here are with you always.

[Gabby Nieves]

thank you as always