Dear You Piece of S**t

A Poem by Gabby Nieves

It’s far too late and I can’t forget, how you killed me back in 2008.

I know you’re here
I can feel your breath
My skin turns pale
I live in a body I detest
F**k this worthless bottle of pills
Sorry Mr. Doctor, you just can’t help
I can’t stay here anymore
I've been biting down hard
Keeping everything to myself
But my mind turns against me in the night
And the only voice I hear is His
He’s telling me I’m stupid
A dirty waste of space
It’s 4 in the morning and I’m shaking in place
Reading these lines as they’re written
It seems I’m not me
My words aren't my own
And I’m a reflection of what He made of me
I can’t fix this
I can’t go back
Your hands feel rough on my skin
Sliding down my thighs
You rip me close
And drag me to my demise
Hands and legs are flying
I can’t change a thing
It’s far too late
And I can’t forget
How you killed me back in 2008

© 2016 Gabby Nieves

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Coyote Poetry

"My words aren't my own
And I’m a reflection of what He made of me "
The poem touched on bad memories and places. Something cannot be erased. Sometime releases to paper. Maybe you save another. Thank you for sharing the powerful poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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LauraraMonique

Oh my gosh, reading this gave me the chills, in A GOOD WAY. Awesome job, especially this portion:

"I know you’re here
I can feel your breath
My skin turns pale
I live in a body I detest
F**k this worthless bottle of pills
Sorry Mr. Doctor, you just can’t help "

I would love to see more of your work. You have an awesome unique style. And I really love that you have a voice. You don't try to blend in like other writers. You keep up the great work, I'll be checking back!

Best,

Laurara Monique
http://laura.productions/

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much, I appreciate your words more than you can imagine.

Cambion

This a powerful brew here. I can certainly sympathize with what the 4AM hour does to a captive mind. Gripping stuff, thanks for the read.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Roger Turgeon

A truly sad write, even more so because it is apparently true. Someone just said to me the only way to find the past is to move forward. I hope you can move forward enough to find the "you" that existed before this event.

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much

Cahjli Symes

wow.
this is very intense in a powerful way. I'm very sorry for what you had to go through...the way you put it brought a very intense and horrific imagery but that's a good thing to be blunt that way the point becomes much deeper in retrospect

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

This was scary to write and even more scary to put on here. But thank you , I'm glad at least i wrot.. read more

10 Years Ago

Writing is always a good medium to let out all your fears and doubts in your mind in terms of past a.. read more

SquinklaPsyOps

You have given "new life" a whole new meaning! If a mobster can find Christ and reform, it is true that anyone can.

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

You're right, and that proves it very well haha. Thank you

Leslie Philibert

a sad, personal, maybe revenge poem that impresses with honesty...well written, impressive..

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the review, I appreciate it

A. Amos

Sorry for what happen and the pain you been through...you're such an amazing writer, this was not straight forward or easy write. You truly did a marvelous job...respect!