Eyeliner

Eyeliner

A Poem by JanuaryDreamer♥
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I don't see why girls put on makeup
all of it is such a waste of pure beauty
I don't get why a lot of girls use eyeliner
because they're beautiful enough without it.

 

I don't ever wear make up and people
compliment me daily, but I'm not gloating
I'm just trying to prove a very serious point
that a lot of you girls need to get into your heads.

 

And for some of you guys who use the makeup too
all I have to say is that you don't need the guyliner
just because girls do it to "make themselves look better"
doesnt mean you need to too, you all look perfect the way you are.

 

Eyeliner and other makeup products aren't needed, seriously.
You all need to come to the conclusion that we're all equal
and that if you got a problem with your looks you need to stare
hard in the mirror, it's not what you see outside..it's what you see inside.

 

Inner beauty is what matters most, I don't get why we have to
make ourselves "good enough" for other people because they
need to learn to take us as we are and we shouldn't have to change
ourselves to fit their standards because we're perfect the way we are.

© 2011 JanuaryDreamer♥


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this was soooo amazing!!! a lot of girls feel without makeup their ugly, but you made a very important point and its true you get more complements when you don't wear makeup. on facebook there was a event true beauty day wear girls didn't put on makeup their hair was in ponytails and they wore sweats. it was nice to see everybody's true beauty. i loved this, and you picked two amazing songs to go with your message that i wish more girls and boys could understand. outstanding!!! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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such an amzing poem, with an amazing message!!! I agree with you one hundred percent, I don't wear makeup, becuase I believe in natural beauty!!! But anyway, it's such a great poem and with such a great message, it's an inspiration to all girls out there!!! Fabulous poem!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree with you %100, I wear it, but for me not for anyone else.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Kat
Thats exactly my thoughts!!! My dad taught me what inner beauty is and i thank him for that:) great writing btw

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is so true! I never wear makeup for this exactly reason. Very well-written poem!
~Aurora

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love it, a dignified prose dedicated to the female form, protesting innocence without the obvious girl power bit, well done, great read.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I agree with you. Woman are beautiful in their natural appearance. Make-up hide the beauty of their real face. A excellent poem. You made your point strong and clear.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


I have made a living as a makeup artist for many years,
only to keep the natural feel on slide film and video
when asked to punch up the look, I would just say
natural beauty is a thousand times better than fake beauty
pimples and dark circles stand out on film, eyeliner often
makes big beautiful eyes smaller and distracts from expression

I agree the mask should go!, like grandmas yearbook

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this poem, it is so truye maybe some ppl wear it beaue theyr'e insecure about their appearence. But your'e right ppl u need to accept us for who we are! ^^

Posted 13 Years Ago


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This was a great poem! It's a message many people need to learn. I hate it when people wear layers of makeup, because they probably look great without it. There is a girl I know that can't even go without her hair extensions and it's really sad because she has beautiful hair.
I would go without makeup but I have a little social phobia that makes me get really uneasy around people and powder and mascara helps me out.
This poem really got me thinking for some reason, haha, great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This ia an Awsome poem Hermosa!!! Why people wanna Cover their faces with artificial beauty is beyond me! You are More than beautiful just the way you are!!! You are, in fact The most georgeous beauty I have ever seen!!!!!! Te Amo mi Corazon!!!!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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