First chapter...

Im not really done with this me and my Co-writer are working on more exstensions.

As i sit beneath the stars i wonder; Is there anyone out there for me? I think God made someone perfect for me. Well thats what my parents say. Their always like "Gabriella theres someone out there." and "Gabriella we love you." I hate it when they call me that. Why can't they get i want to be called Gabry. its short and simple. just like me. I come from a small town and don't have many friends. I mean most of them don't get me. I like sitting under the stars and they like shopping. I don't get it.

Its so peaceful away from all that drama. I wish it could be this way all the time.With my parents pushing me to go to church and my friends pushing me into relationships. it gets hectic. More hectic than i can handle most of the time.Im never aloud to do anything and i hate it. Im not aloud to date. Im not aloud to go outside after 9. Not even my backyard. i cant believe them.

this is why i escape to watch the stars. it gives me peace inside to know theres more out there than my house. My world.its amazing to think theres billions of stars out there but they all seem to reach down and touch my face. The moon is so big over head. I feel like i could just reach out my hand and bring it down to earth. i wish. I wish there was someone to talk to about this stuff. my parents would laugh and press me to study. They don't understand me.No one does.

I lay back in the hammock and think to myself; "Why does school have to start?" More drama that i don't need.More harrasment. More heart breaks.Wow. I start to doze off but i wake myself up. I cant fall asleep here. So i get up and climb my roof,  making sure i'm extra silent so i don't wake the rents up.I snuggle up in my bed and pull the covers up.

I think. I cant stop thinking about him. how bad it hurt...STOP. I need to stop thinking about him. I need to think about Mr. perfect.How he's out there. Somewhere. maybe thinking about me. About the stars. How they're beautiful. Now i think;" Somewhere out there, theres Mr. Perfect looking at the same sky. The same stars"

Reviews

[Gabbs]

thank you

[Mara]

Why are you still working on it? I mean, I really love it like this. Very beautiful!