Paul McCartney Stole My Heart

This is about a guy I used to sort of liked and Paul McCartney

The day seems short when I'm near you,

You prattle on and on, but I don't mind,

For I'm looking at your lips and wondering how they taste,

Gazing into your eyes, hoping I can see into your soul,

Watching the way you hold a pen and how your write those curvy letters,

Noticing the soft gentleness in the way you fix your hair,

Seeing the fluidity of your body was you walk towards me,

Admiring the gentle curves of your shape when you stand against a wall.

 

I adore the way you keep time by bobbing your head,

Watching those long, slender fingers lovingly strum the strings of your bass,

Knowing that you'll always be mine,

I wish I could hold you close to my body at night,

Touching and kissing you all the days of my life,

I've never felt this love before,

Now that I have it, I want it forever,

You are my love,

You are my everything,

I'm here for you, baby.

Here, there, and everywhere.

Always.

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[Glen Yumang Manese]

Seeing the fluidity of your body was you walk towards me,
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Seeing the fluidity of your body as you walk towards me,

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