Onto the sea

Onto the sea

A Poem by Rhonda

Onto the sea

I sailed my boat

And prayed that it

Would stay afloat

...From dawn til dusk

From dusk til dawn

In search of love

I drifted on

Onto the sea

I sailed my boat

And prayed that it

Would stay afloat

...From dawn til dusk

From dusk til dawn

In search of love

I drifted on

What happened then

I don't recall

I think it was

A sudden squall

For when I awoke

I thought I died

At the sight of an angel

At my side

But lucky for me

That was not true

For I found love

And love was youSee

© 2011 Rhonda


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Great use of repipition! Not a lot of people use it this well. Simple and sweet. more people should focus on that method and not allow over explanation to dilute their point and poetry.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Rhonda
Rhonda

Stilwell, OK



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I dont feel like writing all this stuff down right now cause i feel it makes better conversations if i dont so if u want to know any thing about me message me. Name:Rhonda Age:14 Race:Cherokee/Ital.. more..

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