At Times

believe in nothing

believe in something

believe in everything

believe in something

at certain scales

proportional,

told are tales

what has been

what will be

what remains

something

- G.W. Saitreux

Author's Note

Any and all feedback welcome!

Reviews

[Hailey Juliet]

Does nothingness really exist? That was my takeaway after reading this. I'm having a very weird day if I'm honest so I hope you don't mind, but I might just lose my mind right here right now. Or not, but that would be something.

Everything and nothing and all else in between is something. It's a beautiful metaphysical statement that you make here, or at least that's what I'm reading. If I'm off, don't mind me, I might be having a bad day, but that's something too I guess.

Something. What if I left this review blank right now and didn't write a word, would that be something? Wouldn't it? Ok so I'm going off the deep end, I think I've had it. Sorry, but it's something I guess.

Seriously, good poem. Head-scratcher for sure, but something to think about, to be consumed by. Thanks for sharing this!

Hailey

[G.W. Saitreux]

Thanks for reading! You're right on point with the statement I was making just don't overthink it

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Something is everything and nothing in one🦋

[olympiuslu]

I loved this, so simple but at the same time so effective! It really makes you think and I love the repetition of 'something' as it is opens up a variety of different interpretations, nice job!

[G.W. Saitreux]

Thanks for reading, I'm glad you loved it!

[lessa (kenzie)]

I really like this write, made me think. Awesome writing

[G.W. Saitreux]

Thanks again for your kind words!

[Resa]

My review will be much shorter than the previous one you received.
I liked your poem.
And of course northingness exist at least to a degree.
Example if you believe in nothing and have no opinions then nothing is something

[G.W. Saitreux]

Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it

[Delmar Cooper]

Elegantly presented and certainly thought provoking. I like a few words used well, such writing - using nouns and verbs to do the heavy lifting, elevates those few words, increases their worth and the worth of all words. Thanks for sharing.

[G.W. Saitreux]

Thanks for your review! I appreciate poems with few words that convey meaning effectively so I attempt to recreate that in some of my work, thanks for noticing!

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

I’m just laughing, so true you hit the nail on the head - makes me smile, excellent so true🌹love it agree 100percent🌹

[G.W. Saitreux]

Thanks for the review! I'm happy this poem caused a smile(:

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

🦋🌈🌹❤️🌈🌸🌼💖🦋