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WORDS

A Poem by Gurdeep...The Lost
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This poem brings home the importance of sweet and polite speech.It also emphasizes that how conducive can a humble nature be towards achieving success.

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What does the cuckoo give one?
What does the crow take?
With their words of different kind and types,
They win one's affection sake.

One may be like the cuckoo,
Or may have his speech as of a crow.
Possessing the quality of the former,
He deserves utmost respect as did Homer.
Goes here and there ,goes where he likes,
Peoples' love for him always hikes.

Latter's quality of one does posses,
Peoples' respect for him will be less.
He'll go here and there-wherever he may like,
People everywhere will disgrace and dislike.

Speak words melodious which people like.
Be humble and always polite.
Following this meticulously each day,
Shall bring  great honor to your way.

© 2015 Gurdeep...The Lost


Author's Note

Gurdeep...The Lost
Be happy and make happy by being sweet and polite.God bless..)

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Wow!
Beautiful poetry.
The rhyme..the content..and most importantly, the thought.
I agree with you there..being polite does win you respect..even if you disagree with somebody, if you put your point forward in a decent manner, it makes you stand out.
Amazing write. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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wow.. this is amazing! :) you like Homer? the author of Iliad and Odyssey! haha.. he is a great writer . . also he started a greek mythology stories! became one of the inspiration of writers today :)! Keep it up :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Gurdeep...The Lost

11 Years Ago

Hmm....I somewat do like him. Thankyou for thy review :-)
love it :3

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the use of birds in this piece and their sometimes melodious voices

Posted 12 Years Ago


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This is so true...beautiful work pal...God bless. Cheers!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like this :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really like this poem :D nice theme. love the last stanza :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like this one a lot. Do unto others as you want them to do unto you, and spread the love. Great message :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very true, everyone needs love and respect, this poem makes the most of sense =)
Very nice work !

Posted 12 Years Ago


I LIKE YOUR WORDS OF WISDOM .. ..

JASMINE :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Gud job..you justified ur theme perfectly

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 18, 2012
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Gurdeep...The Lost
Gurdeep...The Lost

Shillong, Meghalaya, India



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Hello ! Being an amateur poet, I like to express thoughts, feelings and even situations through poems. General and personal imagery, both enthuse me, depending upon the requirement. I am an engineer b.. more..

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