Hopeful "So" Sonnet

                                           

                                                                     

                           So

So beat the drums,ring the bells,

"You shall be , fulfilled", He tells.

So hold the faith, and sing His words,

"Hail to His Mercy", chirrup the birds.

So, of endurance, you wear the crown,

Intact you'll be,shan't you drown.

So, on the path of your solitary walks,

You'll not be pricked by the odious' mocks.

So, true comrades,shall run to you,

All your own, and no one new.

So, gratitude, shall spread it's wings,

You'll blossom forth and have your springs.

So, the dominion of peace and care,

Shall mingle ,calm warmth with the air.

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

good poem
agree to disagree with the message(if "his mercy" implies to some god, otherwise it is a very very inspiring poem)
do not mind me and keep up the good work.
:)

[Gurdeep...The Lost]

Thanku Pushkar. Well, yes , "his mercy" implies to God (not some God :p).
This is a hopeful poem after all. Some resort to God for hope, some may resort to some other source, may be their 'will' for that matter. It's all about from whom you expect the positive flow of energy, maybe from some power, or maybe from within yourself, ultimately what matters is that,you have 'hope'-a positive residence of energy within you.:-)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

delighted by your instant response. i suppose you again implied 'the god' not some god.
as i already said 'if' the god is implied i do not agree, which is one interpretation. other interpretations which do not imply the god are as you said hopeful and positive.
though it is self implied but still i would like to remind you that these are just 'my' personal views and these views have no intention of offending others' any views whatsoever.

[Gurdeep...The Lost]

I like to know everyone's views, and dont worry, yours did not offend me in any way :-)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

well that's great!
:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

and do checkout some of my poems! ;p

[Gurdeep...The Lost]

will do ;-)

[Inda]

So, this is fantastic! I feel calmer after reading this and that my friend is your gift. Thank you for posting this.

[John Anderson]

Beautifully expressed and very nicely written. Nice work!

[Avinash]

Spiritual and full of gratitude to the almighty. This is one of your best Gurdeep. Thanks for sharing.

[Dayran]

And so it comes to pass ...

[Gurdeep...The Lost]

Hehe..I wish :)

[Mayank]

Good one Gurdeep, loved the last four lines...

[Gurdeep...The Lost]

Thank u Mayank ;-)