FAMILY

FAMILY

A Poem by Arya Dani
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ITS ABOUT HOW I FEEL WHAT FAMILY IS..HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE IT!

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                                                        FAMILY

A WORD WHICH BINDS EVERYONE,
FROM SOMEBODY TO NO ONE.
THEY ARE THE PEOPLE WHO CARE ABOUT YOU,
WHICH COULD BE ONLY UNDERSTAND BY FEW.
IN DEATH OR IN LIFE,
IN HAPPINESS OR IN STRIFE,
FAMILY COMES TOGETHER,
FOR ALWAYS AND FOREVER.
IT IS NOT NECESSARY THAT OUR BLOOD RELATIONS ARE OUR FAMILY,
IT COULD BE ANYONE WE CARE ABOUT AND WITH WHOM WE COULD LIVE HAPPILY.
IN THE END IT'S JUST THAT THEY COULD DIE FOR YOU,
AND IF NECESSARY THEY COULD LIE TOO!
   


                                                         THANKYOU

© 2020 Arya Dani


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It's a pretty good explanation of what family is. Though a few grammar errors and some lines have a bad flow. Example would be:
>IT IS NOT NECESSARY THAT OUR BLOOD RELATIONS ARE OUR FAMILY,
I feel like you could have worded this a bit better as it doesn't roll off the tongue for me, but if it does for you then nevermind.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arya Dani

4 Years Ago

Okay!
Btw thankyou for your opinion!



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It's a pretty good explanation of what family is. Though a few grammar errors and some lines have a bad flow. Example would be:
>IT IS NOT NECESSARY THAT OUR BLOOD RELATIONS ARE OUR FAMILY,
I feel like you could have worded this a bit better as it doesn't roll off the tongue for me, but if it does for you then nevermind.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arya Dani

4 Years Ago

Okay!
Btw thankyou for your opinion!

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Added on September 9, 2020
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Arya Dani
Arya Dani

VADODARA, GUJARAT, India



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Love to write poems in my free time...also to dance..sense of humour is next level..also could fight back confidently against the wrong things.. more..