I can not understand how you always seem to get into the minds of little children so skillfully.
This was beautiful. It reminds me of my children though I don't think I could portray it as effectively.
I love the style of writting and the choice of words.I love the silly little shows' name; everything.
I wonderful piece of writting! I'm only sad to see it end. I give it 100%.
This piece was an amazing right, aww my younger days, when nothing ever seemed to phase us, this poem is extreamly well written, I enjoyed being able to feel like a kid again for the time it took to read this piece.
Its a nice poem. Very well written; can't really suggest any improvement because I can't find any faults :). I will however speak a little bit about something else though.
I do believe that even when we were young, our needs, wants and the social pressure was such that we were not really having as much fun we now think we used to have. I mean during each and every stage of life, our mind, our needs, our dreams, and our problems are based on the various limitations which that particular stage imposes on us. I remember envying my father for he could drive the car and I was not allow to drive it? :)
Childhood is nevertheless a beautiful age. The purity of soul and the height of imagination is great in that age. I was searching a quotations site to find a quote for a report I am compiling and found something which you may like. It was something on the lines "Elders always ask the younger ones 'what would you want to be when you grow up?' because they want to steal their ideas"
How sweet. Beautiful memories of years gone by. It's really nice how you use these references to make a sweet and beautiful poem that flows so well. Always a pleasure to read your work. XX
Another wonderful, inspiring, emotion, and powerful poem my friend. I love the way that the words flowed effortlessly, and made is sound so real and smooth. I love the name for the show and how you included some things that almost all children imagine being and doing. I can't find a single fault with it, wonderful!
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