IF WE EVER MEET

Just daydreaming.

 

 

 

If we ever meet

you will be treated like a queen.

If we ever meet

You will never want for love again.

If we ever meet

we will talk of many things,

and I will listen to every word.

I will never lie to you.

You will never have to wonder where I'm at,

because I will be right there, at your side.

If we ever meet.

 

If we ever meet

you will never be taken for granted.

I will let you know that I appreciate everything you do.

If we ever meet.

You will never be neglected.

I will make love to you as often as you need,

and I will never leave you unfulfilled.

If we ever meet.

I will be your best friend.

If we ever meet.

 

Reviews

[justjenn_2u]

The big IF.............A poem without a closure until you meet her. : ) You must finish this piece after you meet her, then this poem will have so much life. As usual, your poetry lines rhyme, with good flow, and consistency. This is a wonderful daydream!!!

[Marie]

Nice. It's a great piece of writing. Thanks for shairng.

[Jester]

A wonderful piece my friend, I wish that you find this person and that they can find you. Happy Hunting!

[Kitty]

That has to be the most BEAUTIFUL thing I have ever read. A really heart-warming poem... I hate to admit it when someone has the talent to make me cry (not because I hate admitting people have talent but rather cos I hate admitting that a poem made me cry) :) You truly have an amazing talent and should you meet that special someone in your poem, I'm sure she'll be the happiest girl in the whole entire world!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mwah!

Josie

[JC Fox]

This was a sweet poem and whoever the girl is (or guy) then she would probably be in love with your words good job

[Heather]

I really like this piece! It's nice to hear the kind and caring words and emotions involved in the piece. Very thoughtful and sincere!

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

A good daydream you had and it's wonderful that you've captured it in such a wondeful piece. I have to agree the repertition is great and does add to the overall piece because going over thing again and again I think is what a lot of people do and this is nicely capture here. Brilliant!

[Kasey Klein]

thanks of the request.

sweet daydream.

[Dave Lounsbury]

Very effective little poem. I think longer pieces often beocme redundant.
I really liked how you repeat yourself. It makes it sound more like an inner narrative since we do
repeat things in our heads a lot. Nice job, thanks for the read request.