IF WE EVER MEET

Just daydreaming.

 

 

 

If we ever meet

you will be treated like a queen.

If we ever meet

You will never want for love again.

If we ever meet

we will talk of many things,

and I will listen to every word.

I will never lie to you.

You will never have to wonder where I'm at,

because I will be right there, at your side.

If we ever meet.

 

If we ever meet

you will never be taken for granted.

I will let you know that I appreciate everything you do.

If we ever meet.

You will never be neglected.

I will make love to you as often as you need,

and I will never leave you unfulfilled.

If we ever meet.

I will be your best friend.

If we ever meet.

 

Reviews

[justjenn_2u]

The big IF.............A poem without a closure until you meet her. : ) You must finish this piece after you meet her, then this poem will have so much life. As usual, your poetry lines rhyme, with good flow, and consistency. This is a wonderful daydream!!!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

If , keyword.. i love it , written well and so beautiful and filled with longing and love.

Chloe
xoxo

Aww. Great poem! That day will come! Someday you will find her!

Great poem! Very smooth transition to the lines.

[dawnmarie]

nice job !!!!!!! lucky is the one that meets you

[SPINNING ON that dizzy ..]

I like these promises - they are good ones! Lucky is the lady that you so meet as well! Will read more of you when I have another moment.... Liked your opinion on the bared breasts as well so you are two for two!

Kath

[STARDUST]

This is a beautiful poem.
well done.

[Sally Edwards]

Lovely poem, lovely daydream, I have the same one, ever hopeful of meeting my dream, great imagery and I can feel your wistfulness through your writing. I liked this also as it wasn't too fancy and it was a smooth read.

[Starlit Scarlett]

This is sweet and heartbreaking at the same time because there is so much love (or potential for love) within this piece but...you haven't met her yet, and it seems she has no idea of these feelings you harbor. That kills me! I certainly hope you do meet her. That sort of love is epic.

[Vincent Maltese]

AWesome poem. im sending it to my girlfriend. lol. wonderful

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

it's a great piece... I like it.... it's very sweet.... Great job!