IF WE EVER MEET

Just daydreaming.

 

 

 

If we ever meet

you will be treated like a queen.

If we ever meet

You will never want for love again.

If we ever meet

we will talk of many things,

and I will listen to every word.

I will never lie to you.

You will never have to wonder where I'm at,

because I will be right there, at your side.

If we ever meet.

 

If we ever meet

you will never be taken for granted.

I will let you know that I appreciate everything you do.

If we ever meet.

You will never be neglected.

I will make love to you as often as you need,

and I will never leave you unfulfilled.

If we ever meet.

I will be your best friend.

If we ever meet.

 

Reviews

[justjenn_2u]

The big IF.............A poem without a closure until you meet her. : ) You must finish this piece after you meet her, then this poem will have so much life. As usual, your poetry lines rhyme, with good flow, and consistency. This is a wonderful daydream!!!

[Courtney]

:D so good i love it....maybe right?

[Mysteral - Night Prowle..]

This is good, I like the repetition of "If we ever meet." I wanted to sing it. I wonder if you ever thought of putting it to music, use the lyrics as a song.

[Aries]

Lovely....Beautiful expression of longing.....I hope the one who comes along will be deserving of such a great Love~

Awesome!

[Joseph - Michael]

That was quite an impressive writing you got there; A letter (in the way of poetry) to someone you haven't known or met (yet), but only in your dream

So, it's really a great write...

[James Takeo Panton]

I identify with this personally....it flows nicely....very good!

[Celtic Cat]

awwwwwwww....so sweet and I believe every word, cuz I know you are a good man, my friend. I have also written pieces for the one I didn't know yet....it's good to put it out there....let the universe know what you're after. I hope she doesn't take too long to find you....life is short. An excellent write, my friend. Much love~~

[Erin Phoenix]

Thats a really nice poem... it made my heart smile.

:)

[IMOGEAN]

If we ever met, would my world change colors? Would the sky be more radiant, and the pain of life's worrisome burdens be lighter? Could it be that your heart could love with the intensity that can only be granted by God?

Highly unlikely, yet nonetheless, a very lovely thought.

Imogean~

[Fantasyfairy]

How lucky she will be on the day you meet. A sweet poem, from a very sweet man. XX

[Kira Lorraine Uman]

this poem is awesome filled with alot of heart and soul and i bet when you do meet she will be the happiest woman ever and when you meet her you must either add on to this poem or write a second part... also the use of 'if' is almost as though you are not sure if you will ever meet this person dont let go of hope theres someone out there for everyone