Pretty Ladies
A Poem by
a Messenger
All my cable services were out yesterday and I got bored.
Pretty Ladies-
I love them all.
Big and little,
Short and tall.
Blonde, brunette,
or hair of red,
Any shade
upon their heads.
I love them young,
I like them older.
Breasts like eggs,
Grapefruit or boulders.
I like short hair
and I like it long.
Fully dressed or
in a thong.
Eyes of brown,
blue, green or gray.
Any ethnic
type's ok.
I like 'em dumb
but I love 'em smart
with a soft
and kindly heart.
I like 'em open,
I love 'em honest,
of those who are
both I am fondest.
I love'em tame
and I love 'em wild.
With downcast eyes
or great big smile.
I love 'em all
and that's a shame,
'cause t'ward me they
don't feel the same.
© 2008 a Messenger
Featured Review
Technically, I love your use of words, the rhythm and rhyme is wonderful. (ok is spelled OK) This is simply a delightful little ditty.
Love the message. I've said of myself: "I've been sick in love with women since I was a child."
Great twist at the end.
Posted 16 Years Ago
3 of 3 people found this review constructive.
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Awwwww what a sweet, playful piece I loved the honest innocence of it all. Left me smiling at the end of it, I enjoyed it quite a bit.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Awwwww what a sweet, playful piece I loved the honest innocence of it all. Left me smiling at the end of it, I enjoyed it quite a bit.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Ahh, that's cute. Really nice little poem. Nicely rhymed, great choice of words. As always, a superb job!!!!!
Josie
Posted 16 Years Ago
Ahh, that's cute. Really nice little poem. Nicely rhymed, great choice of words. As always, a superb job!!!!!
Josie
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Wonderful rhyming, clever and funny. You made me smile. Thank you.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Wonderful rhyming, clever and funny. You made me smile. Thank you.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Ah! A crushing end to an otherwise joyous piece. You killed me with that. My heart hurts. Well.....I love this piece and if the women around you knew how much love you had in your heart for them they'd be silly not to come banging on your door. Well....you know I love ya! Not that that helps... : (
Excellent piece!
Posted 16 Years Ago
Ah! A crushing end to an otherwise joyous piece. You killed me with that. My heart hurts. Well.....I love this piece and if the women around you knew how much love you had in your heart for them they'd be silly not to come banging on your door. Well....you know I love ya! Not that that helps... : (
Excellent piece!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Great poem. Very relatable. Your description is great as well, from what they wear to how they behave. The last stanza is just the best. I gave a mental sigh and shrug, as if to say 'ain't that the truth.' Nicely done, and thank you.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Great poem. Very relatable. Your description is great as well, from what they wear to how they behave. The last stanza is just the best. I gave a mental sigh and shrug, as if to say 'ain't that the truth.' Nicely done, and thank you.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Breasts like eggs,
Grapefruit or boulders.
THAT was just hilarious!
Posted 16 Years Ago
Breasts like eggs,
Grapefruit or boulders.
THAT was just hilarious!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
LMAO!!! So do I. I guess we couldn't help it at all...
Anyway, I enjoyed reading it, it's almost like musicial, but it's all good here...
Posted 16 Years Ago
LMAO!!! So do I. I guess we couldn't help it at all...
Anyway, I enjoyed reading it, it's almost like musicial, but it's all good here...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
A cute poem and i am not using the word 'cute' condescendingly.. i think it is good.. the fact seems you like all ladies lol good one
Chloe
xoxo
Posted 16 Years Ago
A cute poem and i am not using the word 'cute' condescendingly.. i think it is good.. the fact seems you like all ladies lol good one
Chloe
xoxo
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This brought a smile to my face. I like the rhythm of it!
Posted 16 Years Ago
This brought a smile to my face. I like the rhythm of it!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Awwww, that's so sweet and kind of sad. : > ) I like the humour. I was definately smiling while I read this piece.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Awwww, that's so sweet and kind of sad. : > ) I like the humour. I was definately smiling while I read this piece.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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