I'm So Loved

 

I'm more popular since I've gone on line
  than ever before in my life.
I can't believe how many young ladies
  are dying to become my wife.

I hear from several every week
  who fall in love with my profile.
I hear from women from nearly my age
  to some who are nearly a child.

They can't live without me, "send money" they say'
  "so I can come be with you.
If I can't become your loving wife,
  I just don't know what I'll do."
 
"My parents were killed in an evil uprising."
  "My Daddy was rich you see.
Help me get his money out of the bank
  and you can share it with me."

My problem is this, I don't know which to choose.
  They're all so lovely you see'
Though sometimes two of them look so much alike
  they could be from the same family.

Which one should I give my account number to.
  They all are so very sincere.
I can't select one and hurt all the rest
  so I think I'll stay single this year.

 


 

© 2007 G. Harrison Quay

Reviews

[Kitty]

This is really cool. But I know in the end you'll pick me, right?

Josie

Excellent poem!! As with your other poems, this one is beautifully wriiten!! Keep up the great work!!

[Aries]

This one made me laugh~A humorous take on a sad but true fact~

Yep~ Brad Paisley all over again!

Awesome Write!

[IMOGEAN]

Sad...Sad...Sad...

[Gildamare]

Hehe, that's cute. It reminds me of the Brad Paisley song about the kid being so popular on MySpace :)

[JC Fox]

it is a sad world when we're more popular in cyber space than in the real world...ok I lie lmfao another great poem

[Michelle]

LOL this is cute, I loved the ending.
Thanks for you comment on my story as well I appreciate it.

Michelle

[Kelly D. Burris]

Very cute, and funny. Saddly so true about society tho. It did make me laugh.
I think you should stay single too....LOL
Kelly

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

lol... I love it! It's funny how everyone can fall in love with only a profile... I know I would have to meet someone to love them... maybe thats why my last boyfriend and i didn't work out so well... It's sad what our society has turned into... And if you actually believe these girls lies your screwed because they'll steal your identity and screw you, but not in the good way...

[Heather]

I love this poem! It's a great reflection of society today and done in a witty way! Great job!!!