What has yet to come

This dose not ryme at all but each line dose gose together in telling whats going on here.

Broken glass imbedded in my feet

Thorns around my ankles

Castle gleaming in the moon light  

Night air chilled with fright

Engulfed in darkness

Unsure of the fate ahead

Growls of the unfair

Falling to the ground

Wishing you were there

Reviews

[David the writer]

Wow I think it really depends on how the person wants to imagine this. Which makes this a whole different dimension of fear than what you usual see. Greatly original, and well written. Thanks for sharing

[Bluefire]

Very scary and suspenseful. Great scene for a horror movie. Well done!

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Hehe when I saw the picture for the poem I though Run Forrest Run....but really this poem was pretty scary if you were in such a situation. I'd probably scream my lungs out till I passed out, lol. Yup happens all the time at amusement parks. XD

[Rika]

i guessed you would lol

[Ella]

Nicely written. :) another amazing poem :)

[Dominique]

Neat... I love to mood of the poem.

[Steven Cash]

ooooh, eerie and nice

[Weeping Willow]

Your always good at poems and this is so going in my libary

[Freedom's Child]

I like it, the jagged imagery is great and the final line "wishing you were there" is great to end with.

[Irvette Dauphine]

okay.. when i read it i feel that I AM is inside this poem (cannot explain what i fell)
this is amazing poem.. great job :D

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

its painful and the poems defined with such beauty makes me feel chills up my spine really scary.. I don't think I can endure that much of a pain