light of an angel

Your presence allures me
It also ensures me
That I'll be protected
Never neglected
Your wings glow white
All through the night
As you fly gracefully
I wait patiently
Because I know you will come
No matter what I have become

Reviews

[The dark story]

"That ill be protected" ...i don't know but may be i am wrong ....but i think that there should be "will"........
Your wings glow white
All through the night
As you fly gracefully
i liked the way you have described an angel...really a damn good imagination....

[icerhex]

You have such a great way with words, and this poem is really good. in the third line ill should be I'll, just so it doesnt look like the word ill which means sick.
Great work :)

[Rox Bain ☮]

Wow.... I love the darker undertones and the beautiful imagery.
This is one of those poems that I found myself reading over and over and over and...

[Molly]

Concise and pretty. I enjoyed it and await your next.

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

Your presence allures me
It also ensures me
That ill be protected
Never neglected
Your wings glow white
All through the night
As you fly gracefully
I wait patiently
Because I know you will come
No mater what I have become .

This was the part I loved the most! lol really it was nice and amazing poem

[Owlgirl]

Beautiful, you capture the essence of an angel so perfectly within the lines, great job :)

[Chloe]

For some reason this reminds me of Luminous from Maple Story. It can't be because he's half evil and I don't think he has wings...either way it's an amazing poem

[Rika]

Never heard of maple story but what you described sounds more like this http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/GDMonster/964750/

[RachelReaper]

It sounds like you found your angel :) very sweet and thought out poem.

This is honestly my favorite poem I have read in a few weeks. Although it is short and simple, it projects a strong image in my mind of pristine and radiant beauty. It just makes me feel good reading it. ♥

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Simple and sincere, I like it, though it would be better if the rhyme in the first two lines wasn't me/me. But allures/ensures kinda makes up for that.
Good job.