light of an angel

light of an angel

A Poem by Rika

Your presence allures me
It also ensures me
That I'll be protected
Never neglected
Your wings glow white
All through the night
As you fly gracefully
I wait patiently
Because I know you will come
No matter what I have become

© 2012 Rika


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"That ill be protected" ...i don't know but may be i am wrong ....but i think that there should be "will"........
Your wings glow white
All through the night
As you fly gracefully
i liked the way you have described an angel...really a damn good imagination....


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Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Fantastic immagery! I read this to the pups and they love it too

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So simple. So Perfect! Exactly how i feel most of the time. Mind if I memorize it and recite it to my bf? Its absoulutely perfect for how he is and how we always have been. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rika

11 Years Ago

is it realy that good? sure go ahead
Revera Love

11 Years Ago

I find it is :)
Nice one! ^_^

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweet! Loved it 100000%

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice rhymes. A little too much though. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is amazing. Very great write. ^_^ I love it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short and beautiful P-Per-Perf_perfect.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh! Another angel poem....I like you XD You like to write about angels and I like angels! You've got another fan here 0.0 hope that doesn't creep you out XD
Anyway! enough of me and my weirdness! I loooooove this poem! Short, simple and sweet! ^.^ Well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Even though it's short... It's very beautiful. I love it

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very ensnaringly gorgeous write... mispelled *matter* a bit, but overall shows the perfect visage of an angel, very descriptive, well penned piece indeed ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on April 19, 2012
Last Updated on November 10, 2012
Tags: light, angel, protect, warmth, Glow, White, Wings

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The Rainbow Basin :245 by *emperpep on deviantART Hi! im Rika! , i write still I guess l im a trans girl! I'm add, so i loose track of time very easily I love anime and manga. I am becoming.. more..

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