light of an angel

Your presence allures me
It also ensures me
That I'll be protected
Never neglected
Your wings glow white
All through the night
As you fly gracefully
I wait patiently
Because I know you will come
No matter what I have become

Reviews

[The dark story]

"That ill be protected" ...i don't know but may be i am wrong ....but i think that there should be "will"........
Your wings glow white
All through the night
As you fly gracefully
i liked the way you have described an angel...really a damn good imagination....

[bunny]

this is am-ZING very moving and inspirational! all in all great poem hun! i must say please keep it up!

[Dark Rider]

I love it! Great job! :)

[Westminster Abbey]

Intriguing. A beautiful daydream.

100/100

~Abbey Road

[Country Girl]

This one is really good.!!

[Shannen Forrester]

And now I feel all peaceful and serene, brilliant poem :)

[CookieDough]

This one is so strong! lovely:)

[Rhianne Ney]

Great use of words and great use of proper and decent lines. Spoke of dreams and hopes clearly. great job

~Keep writing~

[Jamie Cook]

Awe that really nice GDMonster, really sweet and cute.

[InsanityWriter]

So very sweet. ^_^

[Fang]

wow, good work i like it ^^