Fallen Angel

Fallen Angel

A Poem by Rika

I’m sorry my dear beloved but I have fallen.
So far not within anyones reach not even yours.
But you try any way, why is that?
Why do you try to reach someone so steeped in darkness?
Who has done so many horrible things.
Horrible things that have affected you and the people around me.
Things that no one would  forgive me for.
Things that I will never forget.
I just don’t understand why you try.
I don’t understand why anyone would try.
I try because you said I’m sorry the person answered.

© 2013 Rika


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Ooooohhh... Interesting. This is just too sweet.

It's like everlasting love that the other person just loves this guy no matter what, even if he DID step into the darkness. I love personas like this and it's a fact that the most beautiful stories come from loving someone who has been to the dark side but still keeps a compassionate heart.

That picture you have, I have that as my wallpaper from 4 years ago.^^

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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I think this really expresses a fallen angel. Nice job! I like it :)

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Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm sorry, two powerful words that can go a very long way. I like this, a rather dark poem with a bright spot of hope and caring.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rika

12 Years Ago

Thanks!!!
Tina Kline

12 Years Ago

You're very welcome. :)
A real artist in words

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Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully written! Great poem! :)

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Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hmmmm, intrigueing... I loved it especially the ending, trying to save someone because they are sorry they've fallen, very dark yet oh so mesmerizingly beautiful :)

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Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh my gosh this is great!!! I loved the emotion!! it reminded me of every bad boy I've ever come across while reading a book or watching one of my favorite shows!!

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Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ohmygoldfish, I loves it so much! ^_^ You are a true master. *bows* Sensei.

It has this sort of dark energy, but it's also intertwined with a sort of golden whole-ness that makes your heart twist with sadness. V_V Beautiful, darling. Really and truly gorgeous.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow this fantastic, I wrote a song on a similar subject matter. Very beautiful. It's one of those poems where you hold your breath for the last few lines. Just fantastic.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hauntingly beautiful...nice work^^

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2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Rika

12 Years Ago

Thanks!
kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

No problem :)

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Added on April 18, 2012
Last Updated on March 6, 2013
Tags: angle, fallen, light, dark, love, forgiveness

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