Fallen Angel

I’m sorry my dear beloved but I have fallen.
So far not within anyones reach not even yours.
But you try any way, why is that?
Why do you try to reach someone so steeped in darkness?
Who has done so many horrible things.
Horrible things that have affected you and the people around me.
Things that no one would  forgive me for.
Things that I will never forget.
I just don’t understand why you try.
I don’t understand why anyone would try.
I try because you said I’m sorry the person answered.

Reviews

[Imagine Blade]

Ooooohhh... Interesting. This is just too sweet.

It's like everlasting love that the other person just loves this guy no matter what, even if he DID step into the darkness. I love personas like this and it's a fact that the most beautiful stories come from loving someone who has been to the dark side but still keeps a compassionate heart.

That picture you have, I have that as my wallpaper from 4 years ago.^^

[Lino Rie]

Interesting. ^-^

[Rika]

thanks! ^_^

[Ahmad Cox]

Yes, every one deserves a second chance. No one is so steeped in dark that they can't find their way out of they are willing. Very beautiful and powerful poem and message. I really appreciated this one.

[CecilA]

Very good; intense; emotionally overwhelming.

I don't think you need the 'So far'.

Also you could say: 'Out of everyone's reach - even yours.'

[Mark Emerson]

This is strong and I think anyone could relate to this

[Rika]

your alive!!!!! and thanks

[Mark Emerson]

Yeah I know it's been awhile lol but I'm here to stay I hope lol 😉

[♪Barklight♪]

This_is_really_cool_GD!_so_many_could_relate_to_that._keep_up_the_good_work!^_^
(yeah..._no_space_bar....)

[Rika]

lol

[Khouchan]

OoOoo lol I loved how it was like a letter, very interesting, and its such a sweet ending ^_^

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. Hard to accept failure when people believe in you. I like the story and the strong ending. No weakness in the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Nigaiyuki]

Wah! >w< This poem is just so beautiful...
I'm going to shelve this... Great job!

[Felecia]

Okay...I'm gonna just say this reminded me of a character from a book (and series) that I absolutly love and that's Hush Hush, the series, and the character is....*drum roll* PATCH *fan girl squeal* Sorry, had to do that XD I just LOVE anything that has to do with Angels, Fallen angel, Arch angels, and of course, Nephilim (and any other type of mythical/supernatural creature: vampire, werewolf, faeries etc.)
This poem was beautiful, dark and full of emotion. This clear shows how much this Fallen comrade of Heaven, is trying to say about his/her past, present and future, but mostly past, and how dark and dangerous, even bad, that has happened or what he/she has done. He/she wants to keep the person out of arms reach, not wanting to hurt them with his/her past.
No one wants to hurt anyone with their past now do they?
This is a GREAT poem, thanks for sharing :)

P.S.- I hope I got some of what I said slightly right XD If I totally got the wrong meaning out of this poem then....awkward XD