Fallen Angel

I’m sorry my dear beloved but I have fallen.
So far not within anyones reach not even yours.
But you try any way, why is that?
Why do you try to reach someone so steeped in darkness?
Who has done so many horrible things.
Horrible things that have affected you and the people around me.
Things that no one would  forgive me for.
Things that I will never forget.
I just don’t understand why you try.
I don’t understand why anyone would try.
I try because you said I’m sorry the person answered.

Reviews

[Imagine Blade]

Ooooohhh... Interesting. This is just too sweet.

It's like everlasting love that the other person just loves this guy no matter what, even if he DID step into the darkness. I love personas like this and it's a fact that the most beautiful stories come from loving someone who has been to the dark side but still keeps a compassionate heart.

That picture you have, I have that as my wallpaper from 4 years ago.^^

[InsanityWriter]

Very powerful. :) I could really sense a lot of emotion in here... Great work!! (:

[Lil Guppy]

This was very sweet! Good write!

[Acucena G.]

AWW so sweet , I loved it

[quinfinn]

i must confess that i read this because i have a write under the same title, however, there is nothing similar in our like named writes. this is powerful and resonant. very honest and cleverly penned. well done!

[Dark Rider]

Amazing! I love the way you write! Great ! :)

[Rhianne Ney]

(: sweet poem

[Clare the Artist]

Very sweet. This is how I am when around people I care about.

[Bound In Red]

Very sweet and this is how i feel most of my friends feel like all the time but I will continue to try because I love them

[MandaBear]

Interesting. This is just too sweet. It is beautiful and emotional.

[Felicity's Eve]

Wow. I think that many people can relate to this.

It is beautiful and emotional.

Incredible! 100/100 :)