Is any of this real?

I’m always standing in the day light wandering is this real?
Is there any thing more than this?
I wonder if this is a dream.
Even though I feel the rocks under my feet I still wonder.
Is any of this real?
Any of it?
When I look back at the decisions I made it feels like I had no control no say in the matter.
It’s like I’m looking through a glass lens watching my life go by not able to control anything nothing at all.
So is any of this real?
That’s what I ask.
Someone then hugs me and answers yes this is real all of it.

Author's Note

This is the first poem i ever wrote, so be kind

Reviews

[The dark story]

it is a very nice poem...the theme is good.....but please don't mind if i suggest you some of my thoughts>>>>
"When I look back at the decisions,
I made it feels like I had no contro...l no say in the matter.
It’s like I’m looking through a glass lens,
watching my life go by not able to control anything... nothing at all. "ppppppppppppppppllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeee put some punctuation marks(comma) .well i am not that conscious about them but yes i would still suggest you to do so........
the rest is really great........the meaning you put behind this poem is nice.....

[♋ Iris ♋]

I like it. In my eyes its kinda hopeful. I mean it starts out doubting and it ends perfectly in my eyes. Great for a first poem. ^_^

[deepblue04]

Some of the lines could be shortened, but good job!!

[RachelReaper]

not bad for a first poem. Build your skills and you can make great works.

[Tomislav Petricevic]

In my opinion, this is a decent job for a first poem. Though, you should pay attention to punctuation and grammar in general (daylight, anything) and perhaps you should try to make your lines more similar in size.
Keep it up.

[Angelic Surrender]

Life is very unsure. Great work