Is any of this real?

I’m always standing in the day light wandering is this real?
Is there any thing more than this?
I wonder if this is a dream.
Even though I feel the rocks under my feet I still wonder.
Is any of this real?
Any of it?
When I look back at the decisions I made it feels like I had no control no say in the matter.
It’s like I’m looking through a glass lens watching my life go by not able to control anything nothing at all.
So is any of this real?
That’s what I ask.
Someone then hugs me and answers yes this is real all of it.

Author's Note

This is the first poem i ever wrote, so be kind

Reviews

[The dark story]

it is a very nice poem...the theme is good.....but please don't mind if i suggest you some of my thoughts>>>>
"When I look back at the decisions,
I made it feels like I had no contro...l no say in the matter.
It’s like I’m looking through a glass lens,
watching my life go by not able to control anything... nothing at all. "ppppppppppppppppllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeee put some punctuation marks(comma) .well i am not that conscious about them but yes i would still suggest you to do so........
the rest is really great........the meaning you put behind this poem is nice.....

[Felecia]

For the first poem you ever wrote, it's awesome! Speaks true and raw feelings. Thank for sharing!

[Muhammad Qasim]

great poem with a spectacular flow!! : )

[The Invisible Girl]

This is a good poem! Especially when this is the first one you have ever written! Good job! 100/100

[Mark Emerson]

I like the way you make it a dream until the end yeah it's all real and we all do like your work way to go

[CecilA]

GDM,

Great first poem. Deep, thought provoking and honest.

Based upon your experience and evolving literary development have you done a rewrite? I would like to read it if you have.

I admire your ability to put your raw thoughts into print. I have to do a couple of rewrites first. To me, it's almost like taking my clothes off in front of people.

I'm glad that you have continued in your career and willingly shared your writing with us.

Sincerely,

Cecil

[Castonovia]

I ask that question sometimes too because sometimes we prefer dreams... fantasies over reality. Life seems more like a dream when we look back and see our past selves so different and it makes you wonder if things could have been done differently. Very thought provoking piece indeed especially the end ;)

[Lino Rie]

I like the way you've typed it and the message it sends. I also think this. Some times it's hard to think anything is really real, but you realize it is all real.

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem. I like the movies with flashbacks. Taking you into dream states and real life. You question what is real or not? Good questions brought to life in the poem. Good to receive a hug to know we are really alive and well. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Anonymous Girl]

"Someone then hugs me and answers yes this is real all of it." AW!! So sweet!!
Well penned... Good job ^^

[Bluefire]

That's amazing... Like a dream until you see, at the end, this is real, it's life!
Well done! ^^