What you should really fear

What you should really fear

A Poem by Rika

Shadows in the back

Something form the past

Stalking you from afar

Knowing where you are

It gets so much nearer

Almost like in a mirror

It grabs your neck

Your friends stand back

Wondering why you just strangled your self

 

© 2013 Rika


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There was an eerie feel to this! I didn't expect the ending. Great write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


its fantastic, i love itf, but I think you might check the spelling of few words, besides that job well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


That was really good! Entertaining! :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

O.O Dude!...I got it! :D This was impressive Chris! Like, coool ohmygawd the ending took a bit but then Im like *mindblown* Awesome job, it was short but potent!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rika

11 Years Ago

Thanks jammy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jamie Cook

11 Years Ago

welcome!
Wow powerful and true, it strikes me right in the heart and brings me back to some of my dark days. If only I had found this poem then. Amazing job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

O.O So true though... Amazing write. ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow. Kinda scared me lol Which i might say is not a bad thing. I didn't except that! Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple. Scary. Good.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yep pretty much, nice write

(exept my friends stand there like da faqu are you waaaaaaaaaaaaay up there in the tr- s**t don't jump down from there!!!! n im like b***h please m crazy but i know my limmits XD)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rika

11 Years Ago

Lol thanks!
Wow love it. This piece is really amazing. Great write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rika

11 Years Ago

Thank-you a lot!!!

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Added on March 9, 2013
Last Updated on March 12, 2013
Tags: dark, fear, yourself, horror

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