Stained black

Stained black

A Poem by Rika

Wings black as night

Heart cold as snow

He won’t protect you

He’ll only deceive you 

Once a warrior of light

Now a soldier of dark

The most evil creature I know

The one whom I despise

My angel

© 2012 Rika


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Honestly, I LOVE this!! I don't know what else to say, it's just good. For the most part I don't do sappy poems and this is the first of my kind I've seen on this site. It reminds me of one I just posted I'd like you to check out it's called The One.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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A punch packed in the ending. Well done.

SG Howe

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Very dark and I love the twist. Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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..I like the ending
=]
thanks

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very dark, I belive this is an amazing peice and I am amazed. I love it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh. My. Gosh! You're such an amazing writer! I don't even know what to say! I LOVE this so much! STUNNING! I don't know what else to say, beautifully written, about a subject I love :3

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Rika

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Ella

12 Years Ago

You're very welcome :D
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*gaps madly* *coughs madly afterwards after inhaling too much air* Awww, that's soo cool I'm like hmm what is this creature, mhhmmm, something dark, mhhmmmm, mhmmm uhm a warrior the devil??, *read last sentence* OH! not expected! COOL!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Rika

12 Years Ago

Are you okay maybe you should get that checked out XD
This has gotta be the start of an evil superhero movie

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the darkness in this poem. Well done! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Honestly, I LOVE this!! I don't know what else to say, it's just good. For the most part I don't do sappy poems and this is the first of my kind I've seen on this site. It reminds me of one I just posted I'd like you to check out it's called The One.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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wow, I really like how I can't expect the content in your poem.... But... I always liked the comment of it, good job!

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