Forest of dreams

Trees made of glass

Grass a sapphire blue

The moon a vibrant yellow

Butterfly’s ablaze with fire

The moon turned blood red

A scythe to my head

The ground now a beautiful violet 

Reviews

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Trees made of glass
ME: OOOOH HOW PWETTY!!!!

Grass a sapphire blue
ME: WHERE?????

The moon a vibrant yellow
ME: I guess its a little yellow, here...waaaah it sounds so beautiful!!!!!!

Butterfly’s ablaze with fire
ME: I LOVE BUTTERFLIES!!!!!!! *attempts to fly off chair* No....

The moon turned blood red
ME: *gasps madly* O.O A TWIST????

A scythe to my head
ME: That's not my scyhte is it?? *turns around to see shiny scythe still behind me* WHO THE FUDGE IS THAT??????

The ground now a beautiful violet
ME: O.O.....THAT WAS CREEPY COOL!!!!! WOOT WOOT! AWESOME MAN!!!!!! :3

[Rika]

Rolf!

[J. Write]

Great write, Well done!

[♋ Iris ♋]

this is great! i love it~! Very amazing my friend.

[♪Barklight♪]

Nice write ^_^ I wonder just how many Dark Dreamers are on the cafe?

[Felecia]

Oooooooooooo *gazes at the poem and the details* so puuuuuuurrrrrrtty. I likes it! *clasps hands like a child* BLOOD RED MOON WOOT! *pumps fists*
0.0 Love this

[Tina Kline]

Wow, I do love your writing. You use such beautiful imagery and then comes the bolt of darkness and chill. Very good stuff. I sure enjoyed this one!!

[Rika]

Thank you so much!!

[Mike]

Very eary but nicely written

Its simple but definitely gets the message across

[David the writer]

Muhahah sweet dreams! Naw, I like this poem. It's fun, simplistic, and it stands out good.

[The Invisible Girl]

Short but has lots of imagery! Good write!! :)

[Castonovia]

Intense ending... *scythe to my head*, EPIC!!! So very simple; yet so very beautiful with all the colors :)

[Rika]

Thanks im glad you liked it!

[Castonovia]

No problem and glad you wrote it :)