White knight

Oh white knight 
How you shine in the day light 
In the murky waters you don’t show 
Your reflection dose not glow 
But still in your soul light lives on 
As you stand next to the burned down oak 
You began to choke 
On the darkness that surrounds you 

Author's Note

goes with this http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/GDMonster/962476/

Reviews

[Eric Wyatt]

Very clever, interweaving the two poems in a manner that lets them stand on their own as well. ^_^

[Rika]

Thanks my.friend!

[Eric Wyatt]

Any time!

[Dominique]

Awsome. The two poems are interlocked that is amazing!

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HAHA! I just came from the other poem! Wicked! ^-^ This one was great too :D Love it. ONWARDS!

[Ella]

Love it, another amazing piece :)

[Freedom's Child]

I would love to see you put white knight and dark knight and put into light that nothing is ever purely good or purely bad. Nice work.

[Weeping Willow]

cool, i love the last line the best

[deepblue04]

This is interesting..... Good work, I would like more added to this!

[A.G]

you're unique title pulled me in, and after reading your poem I see it fits well. excellent use of imagery and rhyming

[The dark story]

you have really got a very imaginative mind..this poem is really nice ....

[RachelReaper]

Very cool imagery, the only thing I would say is to change "dose" to "does".

[Rika]

thanks and could you read dark knight too? kinda goes with this