Soar

I want to fly 
I want to go so far in the sky 
I want to try 
Try so hard that you might notice my strive to survive 
I want to go out there 
Into the blue unknown 
Were nothings has been told 
Where you and I can be together For ever 
What matters isn’t this or that 
It’s if you will act 
And that’s a fact 
That I will always be with you

Reviews

[Becca Bishop]

So far I love all your poems. The subjects are original and interesting and I can relate to most of them. The only thing I've got a problem with is that sometimes you sacrifice the quality of the poem just so you can get a rhyme in. Personally, I like poems that don't rhyme better than those that do but maybe you're more of a rhyming person. Whatever floats your boat :P

[Irishbabies]

again very good poem better than mine LOL nicely written :)

[RachelReaper]

In my dreams, I can almost always fly, and in a metaphorical sense, this reminded me of that, so nice job!

[deepblue04]

I've actually wanted this too, so much