HONESTY VS CRUELTY

acrostic poetry

Honing your daggers into someone's poetic license

Ostentatious reveals your black serpent's tongue

Negative advice conceals your abated truth

Easily turning off the desire to listen and learn

Strutting knowledge and pointing out only faults

Tosses you into the wallowing misguided bin while

Yellow flags fly over your malignant terse words   

Voicing unkind feedback doesn't assist mankind

Striking your pierced tongue isn't helpful, you will find 

Constructive criticism is a far better tool 

Risking helpful tips, is far better than eating gruel

Universally, a slap on the back is better than a slap in the face

Eventually you will harden and crash into the human base

Listen now because your malice can't hide behind 'honesty' forever

Take a tip from me, your scarring words are not so clever

Yes, be honest but show your elegance by constructing not constricting

c2011 GBU