CAN'T COMPREHEND, EYE

The tireless mind in front of a computer isn't one of my virtues.

CAN'T COMPREHEND, EYE

Crazy lumps of soltitude brings on the lazy eye

Always wishing the light won't seer into the hurricane's eye

Never ending blinks shield the light from my eyes

Terrorizing my impish smile to hide and seek without eyes

Cordially wanting Superman' everlasting xray vision eyes

Overlapping my wish to sleep longer than the blink of an eye

Mindless lashes fuse as the sleepy sleeps fill up my eyes

Precious moments isn't a choice of my whimpering mind's eye

Reminiscing those long nightly hours like a punch in the eye

Erasing those vicious lies that jut into my black and blue eyes

Harassing magic that creeps into my mindless eradicated eye 

Elbowing the words that leap off the page into dry pink eye

Needless nothingness ignites the fire of a cats nineth eye

Dominating heads poke poison pens into whites of my eyes

Eerie phrases envelope my polka-dot eye

Yearning to trip and blind a focused eye

Easily infusing ghostly pieces into my black-eyed pea eyes

c2011 LLR

Author's Note

See what happens when a tired brain fixates on an eye for an eye...

Reviews

[Dahlia Phoenix]

"Mindless lashes fuse as the sleepy sleeps fill up my eyes
Precious moments isn't a choice of my whimpering mind's eye
Reminiscing those long nightly hours like a punch in the eye
Erasing those vicious lies that jut into my black and blue eyes"

This is an ode to an eye, I'm guessing? Either way, this poem has such emotion in it, it can't be explained. I can feel the vibrancy of your words trying to cut through and its amazing how it forms into this imagery we can't imagine.