PRISTINE PRISON

PRISTINE PRISON

A Poem by GBU POETRY ONLY
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Only one if you must CONTEST ONLY A ONE LINER POEM

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PRISTINE PRISON

Alas the screen door flew open, ending her pristine prison of solitude. 

c2010 GBU 422 351P

© 2011 GBU POETRY ONLY


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i like how this poem is vivid, and it is a thought-provoking line. you want to know about who she is. i am also a fan of alliteration.

Posted 12 Years Ago
cleverly done.... a sentence that takes the reader to an array of possibilities x

Posted 13 Years Ago
Very intriguing line, and powerful too. Love the picture, it went well with it. Made the line all the more beautiful and powerful

Posted 14 Years Ago
Beautiful and ever so descriptive for a single line.
Now I just sit here and wonder where she is going, and why the prison was pristine.
~Calypso Firebutton

Posted 14 Years Ago
Photo and the one line made a powerful poem. You have talent. Thank you for this outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago

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