I'm So Loved

I'm So Loved

A Poem by G. Harrison Quay

I"m So Loved


A Poem by G. Harrison Quay

I'm more popular since I've gone on line
  than ever before in my life.
I can't believe how many young ladies
  are dying to become my wife.

I hear from several every week
  who fall in love with my profile.
I hear from women from nearly my age
  to some who are nearly a child.

They can't live without me, "send money" they say'
  "so I can come be with you.
If I can't become your loving wife,
  I just don't know what I'll do."
 
"My parents were killed in an evil uprising."
  "My Daddy was rich you see.
Help me get his money out of the bank
  and you can share it with me."

My problem is this, I don't know which to choose.
  They're all so lovely you see'
Though sometimes two of them look so much alike
  they could be from the same family.

Which one should I give my account number to.
  They all are so very sincere.
I can't select one and hurt all the rest
  so I think I'll stay single this year.

 


 
? 2007 G. Harrison Quay

© 2008 G. Harrison Quay


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Bravo, good choice, what a world we live in. Good write, I like it. No I didn't know you before, I'm fairly new, a couple of months only. Welcome back, don't do too many sad reviews in one day, it can break your heart. God Bless you.
Hugs....Annie

Posted 15 Years Ago


The ending made me smile. A nice humorous poem. XX

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This read more like a journel entry which is why the poetical idea seems conflicting when comparing the meaning of this to the idea writing a diary or something to that effect, if you could rewrite the design to fit the applicable form, i think the effect would come across better, not bad though, the clarity and sincerity and humor is nice

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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