Until I Break

Poem I wrote on duty.

Keep pushing me

Farther than I'm willing to go

Motivation is discontinued

Breathless I strive

But continuously I fail

My drive is gone

Willingness to give up

Condemns me

Keep pushing me

Until I break

Must I be so hopeless?

Reviews

[Kimberly Smith]

nice..loved it. so true

[Emily B]

strong writing, excellent work, glad to see this posted here! looking forward to reading more of your stuff . . .