Shiver

Just...a creative poem that I decided to sit down and write.

The heat of the body rises
The feeling accompanies
Fingers of longing reach out and touch
Caressing the soft overture of senses
A shiver
The blink of an eye as the bliss comes to be
With the severance of care from the mind
And the temperature rising
An end could never be so beautiful

Author's Note

I tried my best to be figurative here, don't know how it worked out, but I'd love to know.

Reviews

[Dani California]

"With the severance of care from the mind
And the temperature rising
An end could never be so beautiful.."

I really loved these lines Brandon! :)
The entire piece is quite beautiful... and sensual....

you should write like this more...
you're really good at it!

I'm working my way over to your book... :)