¿Porqué ahora está?

¿Porqué ahora está?

A Poem by Brandon M. Whittaker
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I can't really say much about this one...mind is pretty tired right now.

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After all these lies

How can you expect me

To stand by your side?

¿Porqué después de tanto tiempo?

¿Usted sin embargo grita mi nombre?

Why is it that we've grown so far apart?

Why is it that everytime I dream of you

My heart seems to stop

¿Porqué es que cuando oigo su nombre?

¿Yo me siento que mi alma evapora?

Is it what you wanted?

¿Es qué usted deseó?

Is it what you needed?

¿Es qué usted necesitó?

© 2008 Brandon M. Whittaker


Author's Note

Brandon M. Whittaker
¿Porqué después de tanto tiempo? = Why after so long
¿Usted sin embargo grita mi nombre? = Do you still scream my name?
¿Porqué es que cuando oigo su nombre? = Why is it whenever I hear you name?
¿Yo me siento que mi alma evapora? = I feel my soul evaporate?
¿Es qué usted deseó? = Is it what you wanted?
¿Es qué usted necesitó? = Is it what you needed?

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Wow I love the emotional struggle in this write!!!

"�Usted sin embargo grita mi nombre?

�Porqu� es que cuando oigo su nombre?

�Yo me siento que mi alma evapora?"

�Qu� profundo impacto tiene estos versos! ... Simply breathtaking! Well Done!



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh this so reminds me of some of my work. You also changed up the fonts which is something I love to do. I'm glad you translated the Spanish I think? Anyways I'm bad at other languages, but this piece I loved this writing. The different language made it very unique and intense. Loved reading it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Brandon M. Whittaker
Brandon M. Whittaker

Las Vegas, NV



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Writer (unpublished) for 20 years on and off. I write fantasy and science fiction. I used to write a lot of poetry but I've moved away from that kind of writing. Hope you enjoy what you read! more..

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